Essay revision and editing based on instructions.

I’m studying for my Writing class and don’t understand how to answer this. Can you help me study?

I have an essay that I wrote, I need it to be organized based on the instructions the teacher handed out. You can delete, add or change anything to fix the grammar structure of the paper but without deleting a point brought up. it has to be grammatically correct.

you can alter, and change the structure of my sentences and words

also in the essay where theres a “()” that means i either didnt find a word to use here or i want to change the word cause i don’t think its suitable and theres a better choice

I wrote in red what you are supposed to do. the required parts and where to add subheading cause I don’t know how to do that so you can add fake subheads or what you feel appropriate and i will change them