Fix an essay (feedback given)

I’m working on a English exercise and need support.

This post is about fixing an essay that I did already and I have a feedback on it I got a low grade so the teacher return it to me and ask me to fix it with a little feedback on it. The files 1 and 2 have actual essay explanation file 3 has my essay with the feedback on it.

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jane eyre book

Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë (Oxford edition), ISBN-13: 978-0199535590

or

https://books.google.com/books?id=caklAAAAMAAJ&printsec=frontcover&dq=jane+eyre&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjx8dnno7rkAhXQjFkKHVCBDboQ6AEwA3oECAIQAg#v=onepage&q=jane%20eyre&f=false

Fix an essay (feedback given)

I’m working on a English exercise and need support.

This post is about fixing an essay that I did already and I have a feedback on it I got a low grade so the teacher return it to me and ask me to fix it with a little feedback on it. The files 1 and 2 have actual essay explanation file 3 has my essay with the feedback on it.

—————————————————————————–

jane eyre book

Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë (Oxford edition), ISBN-13: 978-0199535590

or

https://books.google.com/books?id=caklAAAAMAAJ&printsec=frontcover&dq=jane+eyre&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjx8dnno7rkAhXQjFkKHVCBDboQ6AEwA3oECAIQAg#v=onepage&q=jane%20eyre&f=false