Research Proposal Revision

I need help with a Health & Medical question. All explanations and answers will be used to help me learn.

This is a revision to the assignment you already produced, my professor had comments about it and needs me to revise the assignment by added some few stuff that was missing .The attached file has the assignment you produced, and the instructions for the assignment that i couldn’t add the last time

NB:The missing pieces for the assignment was :

Methods: Qualitative phenomenological

-perspectives of the individuals

-Data collection, which in my case it will be face to face interviews of people in the deaf culture

-Types of data-In my case -text

-Gatekeeper-the gatekeeper is the person giving me access to have the face-to-face interview with the deaf culture(this person is my previous ALS 1 professor )